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This journal is meant for those who like to read as I do. you can read about my feelings, or stories. Just know that it is my imagination, feelings, and emotions. No matter if you know where my story is heading its just a story.
First Chapter

The past
'My house isn't that far now' I thought while running to my house which I lived alone in with my brother. 'He's going to be mad I didn't make it before dinner, but I can't help it if i get side tracked I am a little kid wh-' I was thinking before I saw something jump from ontop of the building
"a shadow?" I said "then again it could just be my imagination? Hehe sweatdrop " I laughed nervously 'I'm going nuts'. I sighed and looked at the already setting sun "I wish every moment could be as beautiful like this" I said walking towards my house. When I rounded the corner I saw the house with little black creatures all over. I ran towards the house and searched for my brother yelling his name "Brother, brother where are you? Brothe--" I was cut short seeing him being attached and the worst thing happened a creature reached into his chest and took something that looked like his heart is was bright. Then the shadow came up and it was actually a man with a black cloak and said "your perfect, but this is only a test" then my brother was engulfed in darkness "go--" I was about to shout his name when I couldn't remember what it was. The man turned to me "Why can't I remember brothers name anymore? What did you do to him?" I screamed then I felt a sudden pain in my back and looked up at him weakly and barely standing up. "Its nothing to you right now, but I will have you too in do time. But I can't have you searching for your brother so i'll just erase your memory for you." he said while his hand was exerting dark energy. He moved his hand toward me and I electricuted him. " How'd I do that?" I said quizically. "Interesting." he exclaimed then his hand held my head and the last thing I saw before blacking out is his face. Then........ darkness...

Well thats all for now I'll have chapter two later hope you liked it and comment on it bye. blaugh






User Comments: [2]
Her Bonnibel
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Fri Aug 14, 2009 @ 12:19am


ohhh how mysterious! I like your story it has a lot of suspense. ^^ Yay! go mystery!! ^^


Metallic Weasel
Community Member





Sun Aug 23, 2009 @ 11:00pm


Hn, interesting if I may say. Good choice in genre. I am a fan of mystery ^-^


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