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Poem: Grandfather Clock, Was my Wish That Unreasonable?
The grandfather clock sits there isolated in the hall,
tick...tock...tick...tock...
The clock beckons me with each toll,
I refuse to budge from where i stand.

The clock sighs between each toll,
unsure to give up on me or not.
The clock stares at me with an ancient face,
attempting to win me over with its wisdom.

It sits there in the still of the night,
neither of us yielding to the other.
tick...tock...tick...tock...
Each toll filled with determination of victory.

It sighs heavily now with the weight of time on it,
tick...tock...
It beckons me with its last toll.
I refuse to answer the call with a gleam in my eye.

*i got the tick tock idea from Trichasam, but the rest is original.^^






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Kataramase
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commentCommented on: Tue Oct 27, 2009 @ 12:03am
Awesome!!! I am glad that my work was your inspiration!!!^^
Does it represent the struggle with time and humanity?? O.o


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