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MOON
Moon is the new book i'm working on

ok first off i know my spelling and grammar is not the greatest, but i do have a editor/#1 fan working on that. I will update them after i have them edited.

Yes this is kinda a spin off twilight, butttttt its BETTER version, that doesn't have Edward in it. XD
its a version that makes a lot more sense!

Ok i'll probably try to draw pictures of the characters if i can...

ok what Moon is about:

Kaliee Redfield is the main character. Shes very shy, especially when comes her body, dancing, and guys. Her and her mom, moved to a little town in California, because her mom opened a dance school there. Her mom is a hot mama, literally, and shes a professional dancer. Kaliee can dance really good, but she doesn't like dancing in front of people.
When they get to the little town, the very first day shes there, she "accidentally" meets the man of her dreams, in the forest. She soon finds out, hes not actually "human". Hes a werewolf. She soon enters a world, of adventure, that she soon descovers the truth, about herself.


If you have any questions just ask!

Prologue: Click!
Chapter 1: CLick!
Chapter 2: CLIck!
Chapter 3: CLICK!






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sweet_midnight_flower
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 01:16am
OH MY F****** GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I heart IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Although kaliee seems to be somewhat prepie. any way WRITE MORE!!!


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 01:26am
really? how is she kinda prepie?



Animorpha
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sweet_midnight_flower
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 01:45am
she doesn't stop being happy-go-luckie, i mean all teenagers get upset about something


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 01:51am
......she gets upset....later in the book...
besides she isn't bella...thats a plus, right?



Animorpha
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sweet_midnight_flower
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 02:00am
i know that but EVERY TEENAGER GETS UPSET


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 02:23am
i know! >_<
its just she doesn't need to get upset now, besides where in any of these chapters would she be upset!



Animorpha
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sweet_midnight_flower
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 02, 2009 @ 02:35am
hmm... she could be upset about moving


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 03, 2009 @ 01:14am
why....she wanted to move anyway. she had nothing back in her old life. she was basically a loner, she wanted to start her life over, and to do it right



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sweet_midnight_flower
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 05, 2009 @ 06:22pm
girl you need to write some more


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