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poetry from my diary
Blah. It's got some poetry and then it's got some real life stuff about me. check it out of your interested. dont like it? oh well >.0
TRUTH
Rushing,running even,
She is excited; her mother has words for her,
And she is anxious to hear them.
She does not stop to talk to her passing friends,
For she is almost there,
Filled with joy of the wonderous day,
She reaches the door,
Walks in a fast movement,
Drops the schoolbag she was holding,
then races to her mothers room.
She is upset,
Worry is written all over her face,
She is scared of something,but does not say what.
Words pop into the girls head,
Mother is stalling.
The words start to flow out of her mothers mouth,
Its to much,
Everything has been going so fast.
Its unbearable.
But she must stay strong,
Strong for mom.
These words,
Truth?
The arguments
the pieces of life that made no sense?
Were now perfectly clear.
Streams of tears rolled down her eyes,nothing but tears.
They were not tears of anger,but sadness,
For the lost love one she never knew,
No words of hate or eruption of emotion,
Just silence...
And to the one she knew as father,
Well,
Her view of him will be forever changed.






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Gineira Lune
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 02, 2006 @ 05:01pm
ok.ok. i know i have alot of depressing poetry but its not technically depressing just kinda sad,and realistic....um i wrote this one because it talks about the day i found about my dad..and i think poetry should be written by watever you feel or is important to u.and this was to me. xd so id like to say thanks to those of u who took the time to read it and comment. 4laugh


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 11:22pm
I no you don't really read these comments, but this poem is your best I think ^_-. It really showz your feelings, and how you felt. Thats what it is all about!



Dark_Meow1
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