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poetry from my diary
Blah. It's got some poetry and then it's got some real life stuff about me. check it out of your interested. dont like it? oh well >.0
ANGEL
Who are you but a messenger sent to save me.
Who am i but the person who needs to be saved.
When are you coming,
i have know clue,
All i know is that im missing you.
I hear that you gaurd ppl,
And save a few lives to.
If you have ths kind of power,
and these strange abilitys.
Why dont you use them to save those of us who arent in the crazy facilitys.
Maybe im sounding a bit ungrateful.
But im feeling to helpless here,
I dont like to have the feeling that tomorrow is another day to fear.
If there isnt enough time to save me ill save my self,
but for others who cant and need your help
Go to them and let them see life through truth.
Let them live long through their youth.






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Gineira Lune
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 06, 2006 @ 12:16pm
well this sounds kind like a rap to me..im not sure if it is or isnt..depends on how you say it...then again rap is a form of poetry...if you have any questions about this poem..just pm or post the and ill reply to u as soon as i can.


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 06, 2006 @ 12:41pm
It's good, but the rhyme scheme takes a lot of its meaning away.



Sex Jelly
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Zahvan
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 06, 2006 @ 12:53pm
it flows pretty good.


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 09, 2006 @ 11:02pm
its very moving,not bad,not bad at all



Arch Angel Raziel
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