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An Angel's Sonnet #1
An Angel's Sonnet #1

Death, oh Death how your name rings about me,
Just like the night sky above me shimmers,
You think you are something for us to see.
But my love will burn you into cinders.
Yet the sound of your name makes me helpless,
And Night, my darling, precious, loving Night,
What about his love? But Death's hand carress,
But he promises to not lose the fight.
And in my most desperate time of need,
An angel's wings appear to shield us now,
His love for me takes the sight of my heed,
Then into the light we fly. But just how?
Death now curses as he throws about things,
Knowing he was beaten by angel wings.






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Gothic_Princess14
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 13, 2006 @ 11:59pm
You know Dragon... I can right poetry and stuff pretty well. But what you write always beats anything I have EVER written. I love the poem!!


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 21, 2006 @ 09:32pm
Very nice. It is twisting and flows very nicely. And not too dark, but it still has that dark element to it.



PlantMage
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