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~*Carrie's Journal*~
like an hourglass.. i always seem to be running out of time..
poem and randomness
how can you say you love me
when you never will
how can i admit my fault
my helping in the kill
how can i say i'm sorry
when i truly bless the deed
how can i be of honor
when 2 have spilt their seed
how can i be of loyalty
when no one says its wrong
maybe life's been dead to me
truly all along
how can i write in peace
with u screaming in my ear
how can i find happiness
when u take all i hold dear
how can i keep my sanity
when it shatters
from your never ending blow
and when i die within the hour
to where will i actually go
how can i confide in you
when its you who gives me hurt
always guarding my stoney heart
always on alert
never truly giving
my love to one at all
for when they steal the floor beneath
the wall is sure to go down


that was just kind of a random poem i wrote..... i think its from the emotions filling me from my damned romance novels sweatdrop but i kinda like it.. i think its purdy good 3nodding what do u people think?






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Wolfy Hopeless
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 03, 2005 @ 09:25pm
Truly eloquent and deep.. More of an experiance really. Well done. I'm a fan. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 03, 2005 @ 11:51pm
3nodding



Radiant Halcyon
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Lynorre
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 01:45am
O__O Ohh whistle that is soo good. ^__^ heart
Very deep. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 03:04am
Tis uber guud and deep.
Likes:
how can i write in peace
with u screaming in my ear
That line.
*clings to it*
^w^



sex and butterflies
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Zackeyo
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 31, 2005 @ 04:06am
It is really good Sis. 3nodding


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