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Long ago, when the earth was young, before the moon knew it's many phases and stayed full in the sky. There was a simple villiage lost in the belly of the forest and the vally of the mountains. The villiage was home to a young lad by the name of Derek De Mortes. He was a clever boy, whos bold, black hair and mesmerizing, blue eyes earned him much scorn. He was different and, like most people, the villiagers naturally feared what they didnt understand.
Having no one to shield him for their distain and loathing, Derek learned to defend himself and grew into an intelligent, skilled, and handsome young man. Yet, the villiagers still did not except him. He still had no power.
a young man by the name of [NEED NAME HERE question ]
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[ question ] was the same age as Derek, but looked two years older. He had a well defined body, golden-brown hair, dancing hazel eyes, and was very attractive. His cocky smile won the hearts of many a farmers daughters and the eyes of many unfaithful wives. He was of a higher class and born into the privilaged life of a Count. Yet with his title, he acts selfishly. Hassling peasents and parents to get his way. Through it all he still has time to insure Derek's un-happiness.
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arrow This isnt the whole first chapter. It's just what I got so far. So tell me what you think. wink