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Un-Finished Works of Art
this is my way of getting critics for my stories without feeling embarassed. if you would like to help me become a better writer, or you just have something to say about my stories, just let me know.
Chapter 1 (continued)
In the villiage, there was an old woman. She was a haggered and wrinkled woman, with knarled hands crooked teeth. Her twisted, ugly face was hidden by her long shabby, grey hair. Yet, through the thickness of her hair, the old woman's dull lifeless eyes still pierce through, casting a hateful sneer on the world. She was an outcast like Derek, scorned and hated by the villiagers. No one cared enough to give her a name because she roamed the villiage in shadow.
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