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Death is only the Beginning
Suffocate
. . .I draw my final breath of fresh air. . .
I'm being suffocted by the people around me
Even by my own fears and anxieties
This world was supposed to shelter me, protect me,
And guide me away from what's around me
In reality its killed me
Take this gag out of my mouth and let me breathe. . .
Let me Breathe this gasp of relief from you. . .
Its as if I'm wed to pain
I wear this black veil of hatred on my face. . .
I feel like a slave. . .
The veil gags and bounds me. . .
It hurts, it infuriates, it scares, it suffocates,
After all. . .


DEATH IS INTIMATE FOR IT HAS TOUCHED ME WITH IT"S FATAL KISS. . .!






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JaJa52
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 07, 2006 @ 03:40am
nice poem but i rekon ur a bit depressed. ur always writing about death and all that.
just my thoughts. -JaJa


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 12:33am
Nice poem.



nobodys-here-they-quit
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XxDarkest_TearsxX
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 02, 2007 @ 02:46am
thats really good! heart


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 04:28am
lolz can somebody plz give this chick a oxygen tank naw j/k....this is a good poem



ICE102890
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