Ok so here's a taste of some little scene of my story that needed your undivided attention:
"I promise you you will be happy with the Lord's son" said her father
"But you promised!" she yelled at him, tears in her eyes as she radiated hatred to her father." You promised I didn't have to have a arranged marriage."
The King sighed in exhaustion."I know I did but if we do this, we can save our kingdom. Plus there is nothing I can do. Lord Vader's son demands your hand."
Mara only shook her head. How could this happen? How could everthing go wrong in one day. She ran to her room, never looking back.
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i don't get it. what is it about . rofl all i know is how this person got crying hurt rofl