Hey finally i got some free time to write a novel and here it is. .. ..
if any one of you are free to look at it or even comment it , i promise i look into yours too kay?!
My title is " inspire in a dream "
In a very foggy state, I saw myself sitting in the middle of the street and then I felt my hand was holding something. It was a pink flower. Then someone’s presence is nearing me…
I opened my eyes. “A dream?” I wondered. “But that boy, who is he?” talking to myself. “WELL! HE MUST BE VERY HANDSOME! DREAMS ALWAYS DOES THESE KIND OF STUFF TO ME!” shouted out loud. What a great dream to start a great day that’s my slogan you know. I start my day eating breakfast, go to school, and study boring subjects … SNZZZ…. Oh sorry for being boring, okay the exciting part starts now.
HI! My name is Yi Ting, born in the year 1989, I am a Leo and I am also an Anime Fan.
My story starts with the first day of the school holiday. I woke up with a lovely dream, even it is incomplete but still a dream always gives hope to me that a change would come to my everyday dull life. Yah, I know it’s a little bit stupid or silly but who doesn’t have their own whishes right?
Okay, I plan my day meeting my friend Jin le. We are planning to go to the shopping mall ‘Sunway Lagoon” that day. Even we have fun and laugh’s I was still not satisfied with what I have. There is something missing, it’s boring living like this day after day. I WANT EXCIMENT, ADVENTURE, ROMANCE…but haiz… I guess that is impossible. “Yi Ting, are you staring into space again?” ask Jin Le. “Uhh? Sorry. Said me. “You are always starring into space, don’t you know that?” trying to tease me. “Nolah, I just always seriously thinking, that’s all.” Trying to deny. “Whatever lah” Said Jin le. After I went shopping with her, we went back home at 6p.m but we had forgotten that Friday evening is a busy day, therefore there was no cab for us to go home. Luckily Jin Le brother is available during that time but still because of the traffic I had to reach home at almost 8 p.m.
They drop me of at the front gate of my house. “Bye Yi Ting! Said Jin Le. I then wave back at her. Just when I wanted to rang the door bell, I had a sudden heart attack. Strange isn’t it a heart attack for a girl at my age. Well, continue our story, I was having a heart attack then I drop down to my knees. It really hurts like I felt the time of dying is nearing. I tried my hardest to contain my pain and reach for the door bell. At that very point, when I press the door bell, it’s amazing! The pain was gone like an instant flash. “What was that just now, the pain is gone?” I curiously wondered. My mother asks me to come inside the house to quickly avoid the rain. “Look at you, quickly go up stairs and take a bath” said mother. I blank into space like a zombie and went up stairs. After I bath, I felt refresh, but I look at my hand again and look at my life line. I kept wondering whether that is the feeling you get when you are at the verge of death. Whoa scary much! Must be nothing to worry about I guess.
The next day, at evening hours,
I usually spend this time doing nothing but I always thought that if I am going to do nothing at least I should make the best of it that’s why I love to go to the upstairs balcony and look up at the colored clouds. You know is amazing that the sky can be this beautiful and not many could enjoy it at this time of hour. I love the sunset hours where there are full with windy breezes and colored skies. So I felt “ah how peaceful is this world” I thought. It is the most beautiful thing in the world. As usual I stare at the clouds and daydream as they past by, but today was different I saw something else. I saw something flying in the sky. I thought that it was a fly so I tried to chase it away but then another tiny dot was flying above the sky. The dots got closer and I got a closer look, and the dots that I saw were actually two people with wings flying above me. I was shock! I ran down stairs and called everybody. “Yi Ling! Guo Zhang! Mummy! Faster come out side! We all ran out side and look at the sky. “Look! Look up there, there are people flying in the sky.” I yelled. They just stare and then look back at me with a curious look on their faces. They said that there was nothing there. I look back up, and I rubbed my eyes twice and I saw nothing.
“EHH? But I swear I saw that there were two people flying and they have wings too! I said. But they didn’t believe me. I look and look again; it also makes me wonder that have I really been hallucinating? Did I really have just dreamt it and not really see it?
That night, I lie down on my bed. “Haiz! What’s happening to me?” Seeing things, having weird pains inside my body? What’s up with that?” “Look at me I am even trying to scold myself.” Felling very upset. I dozed off and woke up after awhile to have a drink. I went down stairs to the kitchen. While I was drinking my water, someone grabs me from the back, I couldn’t scream because he covers my mouth with his hand. He pulls me into a corner. He whispers:” Shh... Don’t make any noise.” I nodded and followed his orders.
Behind the corner I saw another person’s shadow. It didn’t seem to see us but it was heading up stairs. I couldn’t just let him go up and hurt my family, so for once I did the most stupid and bravest move that I thought of. I Yelled as loud as possible. That guy who hold me just now: “you stupid idiot, he’ll hear us!” The other stranger turns its back and spotted us. I freeze seeing that stranger rushing towards me. The guy who grab me just now, quickly held my hand and we flew off out of the window. I was frightened! I was really high up in the sky. I just scream and scream only hoping that someone would come and save me from this nightmare. “Wait! Maybe this is a nightmare? I must be dreaming, right?” I said to myself. I pinch and slap myself. “Ouch! It hurts!” “Oh no! IT HURTS! I cried. This isn’t a dream I am flying and taken hostage by a stranger. I cried: “NO! Let me down, LET ME DOWN!!!” I struggle a lot till that man finally responds, He yelled at me: “Quit Yapping and stay still, Can’t you see that you are being hunted down.” I continue to struggle and said “I Don’t Care, Let ME OFF! You! You…! I pause when I look at his face. It was dark then so I can’t see anything till the moon light showed his face. He was dress in white robes like a wizard on television and he has yellow hair with deep blue eyes. I felt that I know him from somewhere.
We suddenly flew even higher. It seems that the other fellow from my house was still following us. “Hold on tight!” he said.
Then Flaming balls were thrown at us. We dodge from right to left and from left to right. Till thousands of flaming balls suddenly came out from no where. We couldn’t escape. He then put his arms and wings around me. He was shot but then he summoned a huge wind against the direction of the flaming balls and made the smoke blew to the direction of the other guy. He quickly flew down and we crash on top of a tree and made it to the ground.
After we got on to the ground, he was still holding my hand tightly and wouldn’t let my hand go. I look at his wounds and only saw that his wing’s was damage. After a yell, his hair suddenly turn into black color and his wings were kept back inside his body. I wanted to stand up and get some help but he pull me down and said: “Stay low, he could still see us.” He was severely injured, I can’t help but to feel worry for him and of course is because he saved me you know. “ I must go get help, you are really hurt.” I said. “NO! Stay here with me no matter what.” Said fiercely by him. “Well, Uhh? What can I do to help, you can’t just stay injured like this.” Said me. Then he sneered and looks at me. “Come closer” he said. I was afraid but I did what he wants. His hand then grabs my head from behind and HE! HE! “HE KISS ME!!” My heart was beating really, really fast. “Ah! Let me go! I said. I turned my face behind him and said “what was that about?” He smiled and laughs. I felt that I wanted to cry, my first kiss gone, given to a guy that kidnaps me and just forcefully took my first kiss away so easily. “How could you? That was my…” then he said: “your first kiss?” I know that.” I stop crying after hearing him said that. Then he said again: “I always wanted to do that ever since that time.” I ask curiously: “what do you mean?”
He stood up and suddenly appeared behind me then he hit me and I got unconscious. But I could still slightly hear his voice saying: “sorry for getting you involve in this.”
After that I woke up, I realize that I was in my room again. “Uhh! Not another dream.” “God! You have been playing my dreams too much! You know that a not! Even giving exciting dreams has its limits you know that!” Talking aimlessly to myself.
“Yi Ting! It’s 6 in the morning, I’m trying to sleep you know! Be quite okay!” yelled my sister Yi Ling. Then I quite down a little and rest my head again, but I kept thinking about that dream which is so damn real, that guy and that KISS, okay now I am relief that thank goodness it was a dream. My first kiss is still here.
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