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Empire: Wrath of War
These are the great stories of two hot tempered twins that find out that even when you start out poor, great things can happen when you start with a trusty box. See the entire series only on Gaiaonline.
Empire 1: A New Legend Begins
clink-clink-clink goes the sound of a pick axe onto the decade rock of unexplored territory. The young man and his excavating crew have finally dug through the cave in which there lives will change forever...

The young man continues hitting the stone with his pick axe with the envy of finding his dream.

Valter: "Phew..." *wipes the sweat from his face* "This is harder work then I thought. Well it'll be worth it when I'm through. Hey! Quit slacking off everyone were almost there. Just a few more stones."

The older men get up from there butts and continue working. Very tired and exahauted they listen to the young mans orders and continue working.

Christoph: "But Sir Valter. The men are tired and hungry. Can we please continue the excavation tomorrow at dawn. I promise you that we will work harder tomorrow if we get a break. Sir..."

The old man offers his please to Valter, with his hands crossed and pleading to kneel down, Valter stops digging and looks at the crew. Seeing there exahuasted faces and how tired they must feel, he feels pity on them.

Valter: "Fine fine. We'll stop. I'm feeling kinda famish myslef. We'll continue tomorrow at dawn"

Crew: "Yaaay!!"

With there cheer and dropping of axes they ran out of the cave to there camping grounds.

Christoph: "Thank you Sir Valter."

Valter: "Dont worry it was nothing really."

Christoph: "Well, were in your debt"

As he leaves he notices that Valter continues excavating.

Christoph: "Sir Valter, arent you coming to feast as well?"

Valter: "Yes yes but in a moment I ..."

-clink- Just then as he hits the last stone, dark energy of light started immensing from the crack.

Valter: "This is it. This is what we were looking for..."

Christoph: "A rcok... stare "

Valter: "NO! Its not just a rock its the legendary War Lord Crystal."

Christoph: "The War Lord Crystal?"

Valter: "Yes, the War Lord Crystal. It contains the immense power that wields the Dark War Lord's power. I can use this power to convert it into healing light and heal my mother and father. I finally find my dream..."

Christoph: "But the Dark War Lord? Isnt he the one who..."

Just then a small yet dangerous earthquake moves the lands.

Valter: "Yes he is the pure darkness that once controlled Mas' Eve during the great age of the Skull War, 666 yrs ago...'

Another earthquake erodes the land but with much more power and intensity. And as the quakes power intensifys so does the dark light of the crystal. But this is no ordinary light. It is a light of darkness, a light that emits black energy.

Christoph gets tired of sitting around and gets up onto his feet. Just then another earthquake erodes but this one completely starts the cave to collaspe onto itself.

Christoph: "Sir Valter! Lets get out of here! The cave is collapsing! Sir!"

Valter: "I'm not leaving..."

*grabbing his sleeve to turn him around*

Christoph: " But Sir we have to..."

Ignoring all that is occuring, Christoph sees the most unusual event in his life. The War Lord Crystal's immense power begins to seep into the body of Valter and emiting dark, vast energy from him.

Christoph: "Sir! Sir Valter! Are you alright? Lets get out of here!!"

Valter: "No...I'm going to stay...I finally have a vessel that can wield my power..."

Christoph: "What are you talking about? Sir lets get out of here!!"

But then a huge rock falls of the ceiling almost completely blocking the entrance. With panic, Christoph lets go of Valter and runs out of the cave without worry to Valter but of his own life.

Finally out of the cave, the entire cave collaspes onto itself and taking the life of the young man called Valter...

Christoph: "What has happeened to you Sir Valter? All you ever wanted to do was to fiind a way to heal your sick mother and father...but now..."

Later that night the crew made a small memorial of the young man and his dream of healing his sick parents. With food, drinks, tools and gifts by the side of his tomb, the entrance of the cave seemed glowing as if the angels of Heaven started gathering the child to his next life, the afterlife. The crew members went back to there camps and went to sleep to start there next day of leaving the area in spite of its heavenly fuse.

But this wasnt any ordinary light. It wasnt the light of Heaven but of darkness. Christoph knew this light but before saying something to other crew members, he disappeared. He must have left the area before starting the memorial of the young man but no...he was taken...by darkness.






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I Will Follow You
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 04:49am
Interesting so far. I think you got me hooked 3nodding


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 05:18am
TELL ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!



Nutmegshadow
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XX_HiNote
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 01:11pm
cool
i like it


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 07:42pm
keep writing! it's awesome. xd



shadowgirl03
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poor_little_frog64
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 03:32am
This is soooooo cool!! cool
Even if I'm not one for action passages, this is way cool!


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