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Empire: Wrath of War
These are the great stories of two hot tempered twins that find out that even when you start out poor, great things can happen when you start with a trusty box. See the entire series only on Gaiaonline.
Empire 1: A New Legend Begins
"AAAAAAAHH!!!! Clare!! Run!!"

"Zelin you Idiot!! What did you do this time!!"

"Get back here you filthy kids!!"

Zelin and Clare run as fast as they could from there old rival, the store clerk.

Clerk: "Get back you good for nothin' kids!!"

Clare: "What did you do this time Zelin?!"

Zelin: "Lets worry about that later!! Hurry into the ally."

Zelin and Clare finally enter the ally that will help them escape.

Clerk: "Argh! Dang those kids. I'll get you if its the last thing I'll do!"

Finally at there home, which is the ally, Zelin and Clare sit up against the wall near the trash can to hide from there evil rival.

Zelin: "Phew, that was close."

Clare: "You idiot!! Zelin you..."

"I thought we were going to get caught..."

"You almost got us caught you big idiot!!"

"But we didnt, did we?"

Zelin: "Besides at least we have something to eat now."

Offers Clare a bun from the bag of other items Zelin stole.

Clare: "...Zelin...I know its tough living without mom or dad but I dont think they'll like it that your stealing..."

Zelin: "I know it is but theres no other way right now..."

Clare gets the bun from Zelin.

Clare: "Just promise me that you wont steal again. Please Zelin...for me."

Zelin looks at her...

Zelin: "Fine I'll do my best not to steal..."

Clare: "Thank you Zelin."

Zelin and Clare sit at there home. Eating whatever Zelin could have stolen from the clerk. In dark days like this, Zelin and Clare would say nothing...

My names Zelin and thats my younger twin sister Clare. As you know, Clare and I dont have a mother or father. They died in the great Skull War 5 yrs ago, at the very end of the war. We live in a small island of Ticada in the city of Tura, not far from the main land. Were both Emporers, or for a simpler way to put it, we both can control the power of lightning but were not very good at it sweatdrop

Clare: "So Zelin. What are these bad dreams you been having lately? Your starting to worry me..."

Zelin: "Well...its the same dream since the begining. Its not that special...you shouldnt worry about it...like the guy in the dream..."

Clare: *in a soft yet very gentle and soothing voice* "What happen Zelin...?"

Zelin: "Well theres this guy whos trying to find his dream of recovering a stone to help his sick mother and father but..."

Just then a loud applause of people cheering completely catches the attention of Zelin and Clare.

Clare: "Lets go see what the commotion is all about."

Zelin: "Okay."

Zelin and Clare rush into the crowd trying to get a better veiw of whats going on.

Clare: "We made it and...Ohhhh"

Zelin *Still shuving through the crowd* "Get out of my way you old geezer"

Old Man: "Old Geezer?! Why you good for nothin..."

Clare: "Zelin look!!" *She grabs Zelin by the shirt and pulls him next to her*

Zelin: "What is it? Ohhh!!"

Zelin looks up into the air and sees beautiful sparks of lightning in the sky, forming hundreds of beautiful abstracts of animals, people, and gods from all over the world. All being done by this one young man which Clare is fond to and not even paying attention to the beautiful works of art.

Zelin: "Hey Clare did you see that? He made this cool awesome...Clare?" *Waves his hand in front of her face* "Clare are you okay?"

Clare: "Huh? Uh...yay whatever..." *still staring at the guy*

Zelin: "Oh god, not again" rolleyes

The man stops his performance and everyone cheers and applauses for the man and leaving small change in the mans hat for his service as they walk away.

Serain: "Wait everyone I have an annoucement to make from the King himself."

Even though most of the crowd left, some of them stayed to hear what this man has to say from the king.

Serain: "Well its not actually from the king but a job he wishes someone to do for him. Its a very dangerous task of delivering this sacred box to the king himself."

With a big Awe the crowd leaves the area thinking that it was a much greater importance.

Serain: "Everyone wait. We need someone to..."

But the crowd was already gone but he notices Zelin and Clare still standing there. In shock he believes that he has seen them before...

Serain: "You two. Why dont you help me?"

Clare: "But were just kids. I dont think we can do a job like delivering that box safely to the king. Its a very dangerous path to the kings castle."

Zelin: "Yay! We dont get paid for it either." stare

Clare: "Zelin!!"

Zelin: "What? I'm not going to do a job without pay."

Serain: "But there is a payment. A handsome payment of very vaulable jewels and stones that cost millions of zen"

Zelin *very shocked* "Millions of Zen?"

Serain: "Millions of Zen"

Zelin just stands there drooling all over with the sound money he will get for just delivering a box.

Zelin: "We'll do it."

Clare: "What!!?"

Zelin: "You heard me. We'll take your offer and get that milion Zen. Hehehehe twisted "

Clare: "Fine...as long as you come with us Serain" heart *gets closer to him*

Serain: "Uhhh...no. I'm also going to the kings castle but I must do other errands before hand.

Clare: "Oh but we'll see you at the castle?"

Serain: "Possibly"

Clare:"Yay!"

Serain scurries into his cart behind him searching for the box and the map to the castle.

Serain: "Heres the map and box. Make sure to give it to the king."

Zelin: "We will. Hehehehe twisted "

Clare: "Okay then. Bye Serain"

Serain: "Wait Clare!" "Huh? What is it Serain?"

Serain takes off his necklace that he was wearing and puts it on Clare.

Serain: "I see...You look exactly like her..."

Clare: "Who Serain?"

Serain: "Dont worry about the details. Hurry before Zelin gets to far."

Clare hurries to Zelin side and they both turn around to wave back at Serain but when they did, he was already gone.

After a few hours of walking on the same road for about an hour or so, Zelin says the most obvious question...

Zelin: "Are we there yet? Im so bored gonk "

Clare: "I dont know. You have the map, remember?"

Zelin: "I know but I think its wrong."

Clare: "Let me take a look at it"

With a big surprise Clare yells at Zelin.

Clare: "ZELIN!! You idiot!! You read it up-side down!! Arghhh!!" *starts choking Zelin*

Zelin: "Im....sorry...Clare" (the dots in between Zelin words are like that cuz Clare is shaking him as shes choking)

Clare lets go of Zelin.

Clare: "-sighs- I guess we have to go back stressed "

Zelin looks at the map and then at the scenery. Then back at the map and then the scenery for about 10 times or so and finally sees it.

Zelin: "Clare! Look! Its Mount Collision. Like it says on the map."

Clare looks at the map and then at the mountain.

Clare" Your right. Were here. Lets go. Its not that high and I bet we can make it over to the town before dark. Hurry Zelin."

Zelin: "Yay!! Lets go."

As Zelin and Clare finally make it to the foot of the mountain they are expected by a little surprise.

Zelin: "You got to be kidding me?"

Clare: "I guess I was wrong."

They stare at the sight of the height of the mountain. So high and snowy that the sky bears a shadow over the next horizon.

Zelin: "Well...Lets go."

Clare: "Yay. Lets Go."

Zelin and Clare begin there first adventure over the hills of Mount Collision. But sonething seems awfully disturbed with the sight of those two crossing her terriotory...

(to be continued in Empire 2: Mount Collision)

Well heres the characters of the story.

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Name: Zelin
Class: Emporer (controller of Lightning)
Age: 12 yrs.
Birthday: June 19
Hobbies: Stealing, Gambling, and annoying his sister
Interest: Jewels, money, zen, watching people gamble

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Name: Clare
Class: Emporer (controller of lightning)
Age: 12 yrs
Birthday: June 19
Hobbies: Reading, stopping her brother from stealing, seeing cute and hot guys
Interest: Seeing cute and hot guys, bossing her brother, taking care of friends and family.

Word from the Author: Lol so wat did you think. was it great or wat for the first chapter. actually the chapters are called Empires. Well that was a long read lol but wasnt it sweet. well plz comment. high critizime is allowed.

Design of characters

Zelin: Zelin was first actually a dragon i was trying to draw when i was 12 yrs older. Thats why hes 12 yrs olds cuz i made him at that age. well if you notice that huge slash of hair that covers his left eye thats the fang of the dragon but it came out wrong so then i drew Zelin and thats that mrgreen

Clare: Clare came right after i drew Zelin. but i thought why not be twin bro and sis. So then i drew her a little smaller then Zelin but she came out exactly how i wanted her to look. Shes also 12 yrs old cuz there twins lol

More characters coming soon mrgreen Comment on the drawing to plz
Wait till you read Empire 2: Mount Collision mrgreen a new chapter every week
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User Comments: [4] [add]
Nutmegshadow
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 08, 2007 @ 06:17am
MORE! MORE!


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 10, 2007 @ 12:20am
I like it. You could add more detail to give a more colorful story. Just a suggestion.

If you want, I could draw your characters in anime form. sweatdrop

Oh, and about the character I'm making for you, any specifications? Guidelines would be helpful. I really want to give you an original character and not one I use in the comic I draw.



Hatori Miharu
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I Will Follow You
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 13, 2007 @ 06:42am
I think Serain is my fav. character. Yup.


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 14, 2007 @ 12:19am
Thanx everyone blaugh



Sciorch
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