This one is really cute! It's the only one where the title is not mentioned in the poem. The story may be a little unclear but I don't really care. I was helping my friends with ideas when I thought of two Japanese words and
Blue Moon. I then build my poems around those words. This one is really one where the one she loved abandonned her ... under the falling blossoms.
Sakura, cherry blossoms
I walked peacefully through
I have lost all my freedoms
To talk, to move and to do
I am possessed by sadness
As I walk under the trees
Life has no more happiness
For my tears, I pay my fees
The petals fall at my feet
I have loved you all along
Love and my life was once neat
But my want to live has gone
Standing alone, here I am
Under the cherry blossoms
I wanted the ending to rhyme but I thought it was cute that way. It makes a really nice ending and I feel proud xD Well, to those who ever come across reading it, then I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment if you will ^^ I don't care if you say it isn't nice, I just want to hear your opinion ^^
