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- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: Fallen Angel
- Artist: XXX-DawnTwilight-XXX
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Description:
Its the part of my manga where the heroine asks that hero for a date.
If you want to finish reading it you can go to my profile or to www.freewebs.com/kingdomsfantasy
I promise that my first chapter wont be dissapointing - Date: 06/24/2009
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- The Nameless Pharaoh - 06/24/2009
- I like your style--it's very pretty and soft. :] But just a bit of advice: even in manga such as Ceres: Celestial Legend or others of a very shoujo style, the male character's eyes are typically smaller than the female's, as are the irises and pupils. Also, when seeing a person from the side, the eye tends to look "shorter" since you are not seeing it in full from the front. Your characters could also use a few more differences in their facial features, but overall it is easy to see who is who.
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