- by I n t o x i c a t e d Joy |
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- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: Memorial Hearts. - Page 1
- Artist: I n t o x i c a t e d Joy
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Description:
The end of it may looked a bit rushed ( Which it kind of was )
And i might of wanted to add in more things but i felt that it was finished enough! ^o^
This would be the first page of any manga i've ever submitted to publically on the net, so im really proud of myself! I hope you enjoy it!
If you find it a bit confusing, dont worry! The story and plot will unfold more when i start submitting the next few pages. - Date: 11/08/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gizmoshun - 02/29/2012
- AMAZING!!! <3 10/5 smile ))) POST MORE!!! :3
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- C-ntswhonametheirswords - 06/24/2010
- <3 5/5
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- ZombieLover969 - 06/23/2010
- how sad i feel like crying waaaaaaa
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- 0zAp0 - 01/12/2010
- FU** its awesome
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- xXUnloved_ShiningamiXx - 11/29/2009
- Oh my gosh its so cute! But, next time, don't rush it and it would look much much better ^^ Btw, NEVER EVER color it! It would look horrible! Lol. Its perfect the way it is! Love the story line! 10/5 ;3
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- Shiro-Jin - 09/30/2009
- I have a suggestion for ya, one that halped me when I started making manga (which I've kinda stopped since then because I have no time for it). You should have no more than 6 panels to a page, because otherwise your readers will just get confused. I learned that when I made my first one, because I think I had... Maybe 30 panels on one page? I really like what you have so far, it wasn't confusing to me at all as far as reading it goes. -nodnod-
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- Xx_Corrupted_Taco_xX - 09/07/2009
- XD i like it 5/5
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