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  • 2nd Encounter pt. 3
  • Title: 2nd Encounter pt. 3
  • Artist: Hikaru_love18
  • Description: Ha! Finally I have the third of this really short manga!
  • Date: 06/22/2009
  • Tags: hime
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Yummy Mew-chan - 08/17/2009
  • Agreeing with Krankhafter, you need to practice the anatomy of people and backgrounds. Maybe work on storylines. I didn't really get it. Good luck!
  • KRANKHAFTER - 07/22/2009
  • The anatomy is way off. The girls arms are too short, and the guys arm is too long. (In relations to the legs.) Also his head is a little off center. Additionally, work on backgrounds. A key factor in a good comic art is good backgrounds. Comics with scant backgrounds tend to turn people away. Work on your backgrounds and anatomy and I'm sure your comic will be nice. :3

    Also, if you're planning to go further with this I'd invest in some good pen and ink.
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