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- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: 2nd Encounter pt. 3
- Artist: Hikaru_love18
- Description: Ha! Finally I have the third of this really short manga!
- Date: 06/22/2009
- Tags: hime
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Turn_Me_Fresca - 03/31/2010
- very nice! ^^
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- Frex-Kate - 12/29/2009
- awsome biggrin
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- Yummy Mew-chan - 08/17/2009
- Agreeing with Krankhafter, you need to practice the anatomy of people and backgrounds. Maybe work on storylines. I didn't really get it. Good luck!
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- KRANKHAFTER - 07/22/2009
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The anatomy is way off. The girls arms are too short, and the guys arm is too long. (In relations to the legs.) Also his head is a little off center. Additionally, work on backgrounds. A key factor in a good comic art is good backgrounds. Comics with scant backgrounds tend to turn people away. Work on your backgrounds and anatomy and I'm sure your comic will be nice. :3
Also, if you're planning to go further with this I'd invest in some good pen and ink. - Report As Spam
- Maiden No Mercy - 07/20/2009
- nice
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- little red riding hood100 - 07/13/2009
- eeeeeeek so cool
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- milk king - 07/12/2009
- Very Good! You are a true manga artist! I love love love it!
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