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  • Title: comic from alice
  • Artist: if-you-want-the-smile
  • Description: if this isnt a comic than im sorry because my computer makes it a pic and doesnt show the actual comic well im writing a story and i decided to make a comic out of it..... oor manga and this is a small glimpse hope you like it please comment what you think and/or send me a pm thanks for reading
  • Date: 07/09/2011
  • Tags: comic from alice
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Comments (2 Comments)
  • neko-axe - 07/30/2011
  • I'm not going to give you an ego stroke. It needs a lot of work. Although it seems like you have a fairly decent start and the anatomy isn't terrible, you need to work on a lot of things. Specifically backgrounds and lettering (working with word balloons)
 
 
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