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  • Title: MOLAN: Servant of the Storm
  • Artist: Miusik
  • Description: Pen inked and color penciled.
    Please give constructive criticism! Much needed!

    Background info:
    A giant evil worm ate his other wing, but since Molan is so pure of heart, the worm became pure of heart too. Now, they survive off of each other. The worm gives him the ability to control the weather, and Molan, in turn, is willingly its host and friend.
  • Date: 09/06/2008
  • Tags: molan servant storm
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • 0991722A - 12/25/2008
  • Pretty good drawing and story.
    I would suggest working a bit more on the water, I'm not sure if you're trying to make it look like a large veil that he can hold, so that was a bit confusing.
    Angle of head is a bit odd, yes. Other than that, awesome job!
  • MopMustache - 12/23/2008
  • Angle of head is odd, and the way the neck flows into the shoulders could use some work. I love the colors, but the application of them could be used a little better. I really like the han grabbing the wave, but it draws eyes to the fact that his uppertorso leads to...nothing. He must seriously have no butt at all. Sorry, but I had to mention it. I love the style of the clouds and lightning. Very Disney Hercules.
  • doomboy55 - 12/15/2008
  • 1 star(s) for color
    1 star(s) for background
    0 star(s) for shading
    1 star(s) for technique
    0 star(s) for originality
    comments : none
  • jwalker67 - 12/14/2008
  • interesting concept, but ultimately fails in its art, though not abysmal, its not good either....2/5
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