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  • Title: Avi LineArt/Sketch
  • Artist: SakairaAnime
  • Description: I was bored, did this days ago. It's took about an hour or so. Didn't turn out so bad. Yes the pose is weird, get over it. I'm just as bad shading as I am coloring. I didn't draw some of my items 'cause it was late as it is. The lines are pretty bad too, I needed to use a ruler, ignore it. No uber harsh comment please.
  • Date: 11/03/2008
  • Tags: lineartsketch
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • SakairaAnime - 11/04/2008
  • yeah i know.i cant draw very proportionate, therefore its looks weird. i know i picked the pencil up a couple times messing up the shades and such>.< but this is the first time i did that. It still looks weird and I'll start to really hate it. but thanks for being honest.
  • mortimort - 11/03/2008
  • 2)the hands. I also understand that hands are really hard to draw, but I thought I might as well point it out. The hands are much too small and the fingers don't seem to be bending right. Look at your hand and you'll notice the different joints. I know its one of the hardest things to draw, it is for me too, but after some close-up practice pictures of hands, you should get a better hang of things. You've definitely got a good base going, just keep practicing. Good luck! ^^
  • Queeen Mariah - 11/03/2008
  • the head looks really good. I'd hate to get critical but there are a few things not so right about this. First off, the body has no shape whatsoever. It's just plain. Also the arms look odd to me. I think they might be too short. Last, it's very disproportionate. The head doesn't fit with the body at all. I'll give you a 3/5.
  • mortimort - 11/03/2008
  • The shading really isn't that bad. There are two things that really stand out to me.

    1) The WAY you shaded it. I dunno if that describes it enough so I'll use an example. If you look on the skirt portion of the dress thing you'll notice you can really tell where you stopped coloring and then picked back up again. That's not a really good look to have for a picture. I understand that's hard not to do with a pencil, so maybe some practice will help you understand how to solve the problem.
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