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  • Wonders of Water
  • Title: Wonders of Water
  • Artist: The Almighty M
  • Description: Reposting. Shinpai, another character from my comic series. Comments and suggestions appreciated (if you don't like it, tell me why)
  • Date: 11/11/2003
  • Tags: othersoriginal
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Erverain - 07/25/2007
  • She's tilted, the bodyline curve is almost
    nonexistent, and the hand is completely closed
    around the bow. That's a no-no. Having some sort
    of ground helps to align the picture, even if you
    erase it afterwards. Other than that, though, you
    did alright. Proportions are good, folds are drawn
    well, and you can draw fingers.
  • Atomic-aTROX - 07/23/2007
  • try and talk about exactly what you like about the
    picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
    background?

    if you are critiquing, start with
    something you like about the picture, then mention
    specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
    too long, eyes are too big).
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