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  • Broken on the inside
  • Title: Broken on the inside
  • Artist: Xx-Konchiroichi-xX
  • Description: sorry about the lines and the other crap..ill fix them later..
  • Date: 12/19/2008
  • Tags: broen inside crying alone
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Pallid Vibrance - 07/25/2009
  • I think "klaora" covered most of it. Except the nose.. And I can see that you have some troubles on hands because you put them behind the back. I understand. neutral Hands are complicated. I have been working on learning them for a while. Also feet... The just look like.. Well.. Blocky things to me.. But keep it up and you'll do fine. :]
  • Tsukami Uchiha - 12/20/2008
  • ...That looks like one of my sister's drawings... -.- but...it's just a little bit better. ^__^ Good job. Just color it!
  • Klaora - 12/20/2008
  • Cute, but please, please, please no lined paper. It ruins many good pictures!
    Clean up your lines better and erase the smudgies for line-art.
    Hair feels blocky. Try a more random assortment. Quick, light strokes with the pencil will accomplish this.
    Define the legs better; they shouldn't bend quite like that. Looks almost like noodles. =/ Sorry.
    Tail is a good example of how to do hair. Good job.
    I love the simplicity. There's some work needing to be done, but decent work. =3 Good job.
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