- by shelly draven |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 01/11/2009 |
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- Title: Cali Mostana
- Artist: shelly draven
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Description:
Ok,since I'm taking risks 2day,(c my other piece submitted 2day for that adventure)I'll add this 1 also... *gulp*It's just something I did during Bible Study,it helps me concentrate 2 draw so that's what I do.The blur at the top is because I'm trying to keep this notebook intact and it blurs in the scanner due 2 binding
.EDIT: Constructive criticism very welcome, I'd like to know why my girls always bomb out on here. - Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: tattoo meditate latin peace
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nylon Steelsen - 12/17/2009
- i think its great! Its more than I could ever do~ 5/5
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- d a r k-n e k o-g u r ll - 06/28/2009
- OOOH! love the colors and the roses are soooooo pretty! nice pic! kepp up the good work!
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- Blueberry Pwaunch - 03/25/2009
- I really like how you kept the color simple, and the rose, star, etc. are very nice, but the girl looks a bit out of proportion. He waist and hips are off for her shoulders and bust, and her hands are a bit small. The legs also seem tilted and short. Keep working!
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- shelly draven - 01/17/2009
- Lol, thanks for the suggestion, but I totally don't think I have the technology to do that, I'll definitely try playing with it a bit, but I'm not exactly working on the latest programs lol. As always thank you all for the comments.
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- DarkPhantomYuri - 01/16/2009
- personally i love the concept. if u do some work on it like move the flower, heart, star and moon behind her, and spread them out it will give it a more meditation feel. like you see her in the foreground and her background is like all her thoughts. i like it :]
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- shelly draven - 01/16/2009
- Ok, advice taken, I zoomed on her a bit so now it's all her, of course, as I said, now you can see the blur better but whatever, I also darkened her a little because she had some glare, also from the scanner, scanners drive me nutz. Thanks for the suggestion ihappyy. More suggestions are absolutely welcome, I'm just starting on human forms so any advice I can get is welcomed with open arms.
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- shelly draven - 01/16/2009
- yeah, I thought about that when posting it. I decided against it for two reasons: The red and black "writing" there is her name in her language and cropping it smaller will emphasize the blur, which really aggravates me.
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