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  • mini river...in Honduras
  • Title: mini river...in Honduras
  • Artist: MiAmorEsDios
  • Description: this is my latest work!! i finished it on the 13th of January and its for the state fair...my sis took a picture in Honduras (if u no where that is u rock and if not..too bad) plz comment and dont b too harsh...won 4th place in a state fair
  • Date: 01/16/2009
  • Tags: mini riverin honduras
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • MiAmorEsDios - 01/18/2009
  • Nurse Rory Chan and Esephiel...yall r cruel ppl...sawy i cant b the best but im still learning so give me a break!! gosh!! *running away and crying* at least a some of ppl appreciate my art work...o well...i really never had a comment that bad...*sniffiling*
  • Sucre Bonbon - 01/18/2009
  • Hm..I agree with Ezephiel, It looks rather flat = I doesn't look too good with the leaves drawn separetely, you pressed too hard whilst drawing them. The water, its too dark. You should make it look transparent by drawing lightly and slighty wobbly little pebbles and maybe fish in the water, also fallen leaves drifting downstream and ribbles in the water. Th rocks look slightly 3D, but they look too smooth, and you have only used like, two colours on the rock O.e
    Better luck next time Dx
  • Miniona - 01/17/2009
  • The water doesn't look much like water, you've made the common mistake of drawing every leaf separetely, and there is no contrast to draw the eye. It's a little flat.
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