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  • MOX The Dervish v2
  • Title: MOX The Dervish v2
  • Artist: Halekyn Steel
  • Description: Hello again. I submitted an original version of this picture a few weeks ago, and I got a really negative comment on it. I didn't let that get me down, though, so I got a trial version of a painting program and came up with this! Rate and comment, please, and if I don't personally send you a PM with my thanks, then thank you!
  • Date: 01/29/2009
  • Tags: dervish guildwars
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Ria of the Wins - 02/26/2009
  • Heh...I tend not to use M.O.X. His size annoys me.
    Hm...Okay, I have to say you should stay in the lines more D:
    And colors should be a bit more dramatic. Put him in a bit more of a dramatic pose, like when he's casting faithful intervention. A Zinn's Lair background would be amazing, but not req. I'd like to see some kind of casting effect on him, like a newly applied stance, when there's always some kind of symbols somewhere. Good luck later in art.
  • Alan Kenzo - 02/07/2009
  • Creativity: 5
    Composition: 2
    Coloring: 2
    Line/Inking: 1 (You can do so much better)
    Overall: 2
    Your coloring is ok, but you need to deepen your darks more to show more depth of feel. Though the pose is ok, you should try something more dramatic, with your lines you should vary the thickness of them. Take this serious from me because I draw mecha, if you'd like to learn more, message me.
  • Kagemusha the demon - 01/29/2009
  • First comment W007!!!! It looks pretty good man, I'm not too great at mecha so this looks better than what I could do, then again, I haven't done mecha in a while...............
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