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  • Title: The Number of Death
  • Artist: Akumura
  • Description: One of my characters' quad forms. His name's Four, and he's one of my serial killers. Constructive criticism, please.
  • Date: 02/12/2009
  • Tags: number death four original character
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Ajay_121 - 03/07/2009
  • eh... i dont know so much about this one... you definitely need some practice. keep working on this one. start drawing four in different ways doing different things. thats what i do to get good at characters in the stupid little comic books i make. ill give this one a 2 but keep working on it...
  • Y o u r - A r o u s a l - 02/14/2009

  • Head:Needs some work, the forehead must be smaller and a little wider at the nose.
    Body: A little to skinny at the torso, make it a little wider up and down ways.
    Legs:The legs are perfct when they start at the torso, but then they are the same size at the paws. Try to make the legs smaller as they come down to the paws.
    Paws: They are a little on the big side. Make them smaller and line up to claws and toes a little better.
    Tail: It is a nice shape, but it is a little too
  • Sintreri - 02/12/2009
  • Tail-good
    Body-pretty good (you have the basic shape, maybe should be a little bigger)
    Forelegs-pretty good
    Hindlegs-pretty good
    Paws-not good (the legs need to get smaller as they reach the paws and the paws should have some dimension, toes behind toes, not all flat, mmkay ^^)
    Neck-okay (a bit mis-proportioned as compared to the head)
    Head-okay (show some dimension, if he's a killer, he's a predator, which means his eyes should be closer to the front...scientifically speaking =3)
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