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  • Elf - a try for Shojo
  • Title: Elf - a try for Shojo
  • Artist: Darknakato
  • Description: I saw a quite cute Shojo picture and somehow I felt like trying to draw shojo.
    Well, I like the hair but I think I failed at the outfit coloration....
  • Date: 04/11/2009
  • Tags: shojo
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Pikajane - 06/08/2009
  • The hair is beautiful! Although you may not like the outfit I love it. I also think the arms are cute, even though I guess in shojo they are a little more slender and elongated. I do not fell as though her waist is too skinny, I mean look at Sailor Moon! Her waist is like as skinny as her neck! The right eye seems a little crooked, but they are very big and pretty, just like in shojo manga biggrin 5/5
  • no longer active anymore - 04/23/2009
  • Not bad, not bad. But, no offense just some constructive criticism, the eyelashes look a little wiry. Try fanning them out a bit more. As for the waist... it's just a tad too skinny. Overall, nice effort! 3.5/5
  • Amadeli - 04/18/2009
  • well, the coloring and shading is fine, but the arms are at a wierd angle,and slightly bulky for shojo manga. you really want long, slender, graceful arms, and a somewhat longer torso. 3nodding other than that, thats all i got! heart
 
 
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