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  • Title: Terrance
  • Artist: DeerestHammy
  • Description: This is just another of my characters. tell me what I need to improve on and what's good already please! Thank you!
  • Date: 04/14/2009
  • Tags: terrance
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • xKiklala - 03/20/2012
  • I'd say its nicely done, considering some of the things I've seen and drawn. The nose is a bit awkward and the eyes look out of place, too far apart. Try fixing up the face, okay? 3/5. ^^
  • insanelozer - 04/17/2009
  • It's pretty good but I think there need to be more curves on the body to make it more realistic.(even though it's anime)
    The head looks positioned so I think you should make the right eye a bit smaller to give it more effect. Btw, my spelling is..yeah so yeah. >>"
  • III Piper III - 04/16/2009
  • needs alot of work....
    its out of proportion.
    the hands are off, look at reference pictures.
    the nose is huge...dont make it so big.
    abbs are in right place, but add to them.
    make them 3D, and look at human reference pictures.
    Thats what i do when i draw animals, and i practice everyday.
    keep practicing girl, you will get better if you set your mind to it ~_^
  • BaleenSample - 04/15/2009
  • okkaayyyyy!
    the good: you have the overall shape of the human body down, and i like the hands, except that the one in the pocket has a stub or something on it. i also like the eyes.

    the not so good: i think that for me, the nose destroyed the face. perhaps you should try making it a little smaller and moving it to the left. The abs look good, but they don't blend and aren't 3D like everything else.

    overall good picture. 4/5 hope this helped.
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