- by x Blissful Oblivion x |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 05/02/2009 |
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- Title: The New & Improved Sofia
- Artist: x Blissful Oblivion x
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Description:
Right now im going back to all the comments ive gotten (well the helpful ones) and im trying to fix all my drawings before i draw anymore.
And with Sofia i fixed the head and neck. I hope the head is still to big.
Comments Welcomed and Appreciated :) - Date: 05/02/2009
- Tags: improved sofia
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Comments (6 Comments)
- DynamicRose - 01/15/2010
- I pretty much agree with Raindrop. Your drawing needs a lot of work, sorry to say. You also need to add some color and shading. Her hair also looks weird. 2/5
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- Raindrop Kiss - 05/05/2009
- Her eyes are too high thus causing her to have a small forehead. Also judging from her corset she really skinny so widen it out more? To me the neck seems a bit too long, but if you like the look it that's fine. With the bangs you don't need to only draw them within the circle because long bangs sway in the wind. You should curve them with the shape for the face. Example. I hope I wasn't too critical. sweatdrop
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- x Blissful Oblivion x - 05/03/2009
- The head is still to big? I guess i'll to draw it again. But is the neck ok???
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- -Republic-of-Greed- - 05/03/2009
- proportions...
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- Ryoken65 - 05/02/2009
- Work on the head and it will be a 10/10. To me, right now its a 9.5/10.
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- arthelcargill1994 - 05/02/2009
- so much better than I could ever draw, u've got talent, kid.
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