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  • Title: Horse
  • Artist: fillyluver
  • Description: i waz expertimanting with oil pastels and i thought it came out ok (i havnt used oil pastels in a yr) pleaz rate thanx
  • Date: 06/01/2009
  • Tags: horse painting drawing
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Deloix - 04/19/2010
  • It's good, but here are the things to change:
    (1) The cheeck is to far back and needs to be rounder and slittly lower down, the eye sould balance at the top of the cheeck "plate bone"
    (2) At the tip of the face is the muzzle, skin around her is soft, fatty and chubby
    (3) Add muscle under the neck, it helps surrport the head

    (4) PM me and I'll redline it for you if you like, to put the above into an image, referance pictures will really help smile
    4/5
  • apollosgirl95 - 06/04/2009
  • his cheek is too far back, and his mane could use some highlighting but i like the mixing of colors on his coat. pretty good!
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