- by Psychedelic Veins |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Invasion
- Artist: Psychedelic Veins
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Description:
The colors dripped down from the ceiling, crept from the walls, and began to crawl through the air towards my one solitary chair. I could see them as plain as I could see my own face through the crack in the bathroom door, on the sliver of a mirror that hung there. They came with a hunger for who I was, and ate away at the darkness inside of me, and left me behind with nothing but a seated stranger with a new light.
Just something I drew one day, and a bit of a poem that I wrote with it. - Date: 06/16/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- onlycookie - 06/16/2009
- cool!
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- Psychedelic Veins - 06/16/2009
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Danke!
What do you think ought to be changed to fix that? - Report As Spam
- BattleStarPicketFence - 06/16/2009
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Beautiful poem.
I think the style is fun and has personality, but doesn't fit with the tone of the poem and what you're portraying. - Report As Spam