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  • Hard Rocker
  • Title: Hard Rocker
  • Artist: DeniableCorpse
  • Description: this is my avi i drew today, she loves to rock =). I hope you like it this is my first time in avi art arena. thankyou :)
  • Date: 07/01/2009
  • Tags: hard rocker
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • ItzApple - 05/18/2010
  • The head is much too large. The torso is too long and the hands are too small. I can't imagine a girl that could support such a masculine upper-body with such short, stick-like legs. Feet aren't supposed to be rectangles. Heads aren't supposed to be... what, a rhombus? It's like a foot-ball... ..The... microphone looks fine, I suppose...That nose is just... Well, all I can say is that you should work on anatomy and proportion. I don't mean to offend, I am trying to speak as a critiq here.
  • pickleddegg - 02/09/2010
  • There is a lot of things you did wrong here. The head is way too big and the side of her face is too far in. Her chest is too big for the rest of the body and her legs need shape. Her arms look muscular like boys arms and kinda long for her body. Don't take me wrong but criticism is what you need to improve your drawing skills.
 
 
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