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  • graffiti poem
  • Title: graffiti poem
  • Artist: im fool wit t
  • Description: did this when i was in Lexington,TN
  • Date: 07/06/2009
  • Tags: graffiti poem
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  • SilverFeathre - 07/06/2009
  • that's great! very creative, great poem; the only things I would change would be "did its blast". A better word than did... and better grammar. (past=passed). "the transits buffing put forth their blast". etc. very good; i'm pleased.
 
 
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