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  • My first real attempt at real
  • Title: My first real attempt at real
  • Artist: Yashiro Kunomeo
  • Description: I tried to draw from a realistic piece on pain shop pro for the first time
    I think something doesn't quite sit well with me. I liked it at first but the more I look at it the more it looks wrong.
    Please if you could, post any advice on realism or maybe tutorials thank you!
  • Date: 07/28/2009
  • Tags: first real attempt real
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • luv_tink - 07/29/2009
  • It's pretty good for your first try, but the shading is too bold and doesn't blend well enough and the back teeth look really odd.
  • Yashiro Kunomeo - 07/28/2009
  • In my defense the teeth are never completely straight or equal this would look very fake and possibly like she had buck teeth . The lady is wearing lipstick ad she's smiling definitely not weird shaped, and what is so mad about a hearty laugh........I've taken your critique but I don't believe that the points that your touching on actually have anything wrong with them. XD Appreciated though

    @Bella- Thank you smile
  • Mizzooth - 07/28/2009
  • teeth are... hmm, unequal. and mouth are wrong. too red and weird shaped. and the expression is kinda mad.
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