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  • Artist: xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx
  • Description: (ill b adding a poem later on just dont have time at the moment)
  • Date: 12/01/2009
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  • Phantom-of_Winter - 12/02/2009
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    fixing your anatomy breast up. I believe this is where you're having the most trouble. As I said before, many times before, look at anatomy references. They will help you a great deal. And I also want you to start focusing on shadows and lighting. I see you made highlights in the hair, but it's very dim. Try to show more form upon her and her clothing. 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 12/02/2009
  • (Sorry for late critique, my mom kicked me off before I could finish). Okay, the anatomy is looking a little better (and you improved, no doubt), but it looks like you're still having trouble with the face. Actually, this is somewhat similar to the first piece I critiqued on. Either you need to make your lips smaller or fix the chin (and maybe your nose needs to be smaller too.) The shoulders also might need work, they look very stiff. Since you got the breasts down okay, try focusing on fixing
 
 
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