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  • Title: Daze
  • Artist: Cheshire_888
  • Description: The picture was too big for my scanner T-T anyway, this is the first time i've colored somthing with soft pastel pencils, or even pastel, anyway, this is only a practice for coloring, if any of you have seen my Kira[1] then you would understand the stiches on his eye, (or at least that his eye is normally sealed shut)

    Creative critisism is urged!!!
  • Date: 04/09/2010
  • Tags: daze
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Team Tardis - The Doctor - 04/13/2010
  • The way the arms look connected to the body is a little awkward. I can clearly see what you were trying to do, but something about it draws my eye and makes me feel like something doesn't seem quite right. I think the arm going down goes up a little too far to the shoulder, and the other arm is at a strange angle for the person looking at it. I would show a little more shoulder and upper arm, and curve the lower arm out and around more, so it's more pronounced. I really love your style tho.
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