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  • PunkRainbow14 & StarDrummer24
Comments (6 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/14/2010
  • -continued-
    things that could be fixed, but I'll just say that you should look up anatomy references so you can avoid disproportioned bodies. One last thing I think that can make this piece look better is maybe adding some values (like shading and a light source). It would defintley make the characters stand out more.
    Overall: You did an okay job, just be careful of your anatomy. You should also add some values to get a decent art piece. Keep practicing. 2/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/14/2010
  • What I like about this: It's very cute. :] I like how it gives off a little happy feeling.
    What I think should be improved: The anatomy is a little disproportioned. For example, the heads are too big even for chibis. If I took my fingers and measured the amount of times the heads go into the body, the third time would go over the feet. For that, all I have to type is watch out for how big the body is. The hands are also too tiny (for the one holding the bag). There are also a lot of little
 
 
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