- Title: Blind Kimiko and Kya Friendshi
- Artist: Denoxkun
- Description: This is one of my first drawings I did of my characters on my DSi Art Academy, hope you all like it :)
- Date: 06/19/2010
- Tags: blind kimiko friendship drawing nintendo
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- Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
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anatomy study sheets (and be very specific what you type... others you get something else) or buy one of those anatomy models. If you are still having trouble with anatomy, then try drawing out shapes to position your body. Since you're a beginner, start out slow practice on how you draw bodies. If you keep at it, you'll be better at it in no time (that's what happened to me). Although I'm grading this drawing a 2/5, if you keep practicing that score will be higher. - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
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Also, I see what you were trying to do with the girl's arm (wrapping her arm around the guy) but it looks like there is no movement and there is just a random hand on the guys shoulder. This is what I suggest you do to fix all the problems I specified; learn anatomy. You can start by drawing poses from pictures (but not trace). Learn how the body moves (use a friend to model for you or look at yourself in a mirror and pose). Also, if you're still having trouble try to look up some an - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 06/21/2011
- I'm going to branch off on FanGirl77's comment. She is right, the heads are deformed because 1; It appears the heads are much bigger than the body and 2; a lot of the face proportions are off (for example the girl's mouth should nit be that high). The ears are extremely big, way too big to be a human's ear and it also looks like a slice of the girl's head is missing. Another thing that's wrong with this picture is the bodies. They look scrunched from the neck to the chest. Also, I see what you
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- out of controll - 06/19/2010
- um...yah 2/5
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- FanGirl77 - 06/19/2010
- It's pretty good! (Better than most of my drawings) But I didn't really like the form of their heads. Either way, it is still a pretty good drawing. 3/5 stars.
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