- Title: Luna Cresant
- Artist: ralola
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Description:
this was made for a Soul eater RP on DeviantArt XD
its was really fun to meke and i beleave it looks really awesome
but anyways this is a colab with my bff i did the drawing and color scheme and she edited to perfection!
so rate and comment - Date: 08/15/2010
- Tags: luna cresant
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Sila Calien - 08/18/2010
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Oh I love the name Luna (and Soul Eater xD) Now for some constructive critisism (this is to help you improve) 1. The arms are too long and the legs are a little too short. 2. The feet are too short and too pointed. 3. The neck is way too thin and the chest is a bit too wide. 4. The eye is way too large. 5. The hair and head all look unartural and ununiform.
For all its flaws though it is an excellent start and the coloring and shading and most importantly the idea are all great! - Report As Spam
