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  • Arenas
  • ready to live
  • Title: ready to live
  • Artist: kawaii-cokie
  • Description: anime, new style:P!
    i want to be proffesional so can i ask you a favor?
    can you crtique it??? please i need perfectionate them, feel free to express yourself
    sorry for my english(:
  • Date: 08/29/2010
  • Tags: ready live
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • norIeras - 02/10/2014
  • chin is a little big, hands are too small, make the other one more prominent/noticeable. use an actual umbrella/parasol as a reference. and if you're going to use a light source for her hair, use it for the rest of the picture too - make sure the shadows and lighting are even
  • sohi_moon - 08/31/2010
  • the hands are a little small, and the body is kinda blurry and confusing to the eye, maybe clean it up a little? and a little more shading on the hair, to make it look less like a solid mass, but overall its pretty amazing!
  • TheLAsiaNG - 08/31/2010
    But I think you should like, make the hands a bit bigger... if you like, visualized her whole body, her hands would look kinda small... unless you wanted them like that!!!
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