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  • Tiburon and the Fish
  • Title: Tiburon and the Fish
  • Artist: vulpineCrafter
  • Description: Tiburon gets real bored in his lake with only fish, crustaceans, and Toll.
    PLEASE GIVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
    If there is anything that you see wrong with this, please tell me. I want to make it as good as I possibly can. There are plenty of things I can't do, but there are lots I can still do as well. So please tell me.
    Dang it. It would look a lot better if you could see it in full size. Oh well.
  • Date: 04/11/2011
  • Tags: tiburon fish merman underwater ocean
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • StrawberryGuppy - 04/27/2015
  • Really great details on the body, tail and stone platform. smile Therefore it's somewhat a pity that you haven't added more to the background to give it depth like the elements in front smile

    Excellent work! 4/5
  • Aquarius God - 01/03/2013
  • I love it . jealous that I cant do digital art Im resrticted to colored pencil tho i love em lol. but it looks great. awesome job 5/5
  • Velisuna - 04/12/2011
  • Digital art really impresses me to begin with. The only thing right now that I'd suggest is perhaps filling the background with more than just a gradient- a little bit more detail. While you want Tiburon to be the focal point, adding to the background does not make it detract from your main character.
    Maybe cleaning up the black lines, as well- particularly around the bicep and tricep.
 
 
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