- Title: xX_Debitto_Xx
- Artist: JokaNeko
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Description:
I think I'm better at drawing girls ^^;;
but I'm still figuring out how to get better.
So comments appreciated. - Date: 06/03/2013
- Tags: xxdebittoxx pencil grayscale jokaneko
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Comments (3 Comments)
- panda8579 - 07/05/2013
- (continued) the hair seems to bend more like paper than like wavy hair, but overall I LOVE the details you put into the eyes and the way you did the mouth!! biggrin (sorry if some of my comments seem mean... I just want your talent to blossom!!!!! biggrin ) have a nice day and keep up the good work! :3
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- panda8579 - 07/05/2013
- oh wait, I read that wrong >-< but... as far as male comments go.... the chin shape is perfect for males but I would suggest centering it better with the neck, and possibly moving the nose down a little more and shortening it, while moving the mouth over a but the lines under and above the eye seem a little too long in proportion to everything else, and the hair seems reasonable, but seems to need a better shape to it, which makes the eyes and eyebrows down more to make it more believable, yet t
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- panda8579 - 07/05/2013
- is it a girl? (sorry I honestly think it looks more like a male) with females, the faces tend to be more rounded out like typical shoujo faces, and the eyes are usually big and round, where the hair is typically rounded to the head and the neck is nice and slender with few hard lines as the shoulders tend to be small and delicate and the mouths tend to be small and joyful. But as I think this is a guy it looks great!! if you want anymore feedback on anything feel free to pm me anytime biggrin
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