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  • Eyes before & after. :D
  • Title: Eyes before & after. :D
  • Artist: Hato Bakufu
  • Description: I think I did a better job on this one than I did on the other one..
    Should I keep editing? I actually think this one's cool looking... But I'll let you decide!
  • Date: 02/17/2009
  • Tags: eyes before after
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Tsunax27 - 02/24/2009
  • Also you widened the cornea a bit (though it might've been intentional). Nevertheless the "after" eye gives lots of impact to the viewer. I definitely think you should keep going. If you have patience to edit these pictures, I'm sure that you can make a good career out of it. biggrin
  • Tsunax27 - 02/24/2009
  • Wow, you did a good job, the "after" picture gives a comic-like feeling (I don't know if you were aiming for that but that's how I feel ^^;..) The yellow is a nice touch but I think you overdid it with the darkening. In the "before" picture you can clearly see the shadows gradually fading into black. But in the "after" pic, it seems like the black bleeded into the eyeball >_>.. don't make the shadow part and the light part so separated, they are always gradually seeping into each other.
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