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  • The Persistence of Memory
  • Title: The Persistence of Memory
  • Artist: PsychedelicDreams
  • Description: Work in progress. I realize that she looks obviously cut and pasted, it was difficult because her hair was so frizzy. I applied a cross-process look to give it a retro feel.
    PLEASEPLEASE leave a comment, I really need critiques. Tell me about color, composition, lighting, the whole bit. Bad placement of the clocks? Please tell all.
    I really need these technical critiques, I'm in the process of learning what makes a good photo. plus, you get gold for commenting!
  • Date: 07/01/2009
  • Tags: persistence memory time
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • tiggerdot - 09/05/2009
  • Ok now i would take the lighting and darken it. Then remove all the clocks. Remember simpler is better. Then just have fun with the photo. Add a personal touch.
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