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- Title: Victorian Vampire
- Artist: Melancholy Love
- Description: Abigail was born in the 1800’s. Her father forced her to marry a man who was 25, 9 years older than herself. But before the marriage could happen, he took a fatal turn on the road and his body was never found. Still her father tried to find her a husband, until the last guy her father pushed on her couldn’t be killed. But the day before the wedding, it was Abigail that had been killed. She sill roams the earth, searching for him. For eternity.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: victorian vampire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- x Dark Moon Starsong x - 12/11/2008
- Could have been done better.
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- sen-sazionale - 12/11/2008
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-rolls eyes- We are allowed to be critical. I think this would have been SO much better if you had left out the machete and the vampire teeth. Also the moon and bats don't go. I just don't like this.
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- bboy_dux - 12/11/2008
- god damn.. have to scare me before i take a shower GOSH! and its almost midnight too! T.T
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- Captaiin Awesome - 12/11/2008
- I disagree with some of the people who've commented. Origmasami "-99/5" why? just cuz of the machette. -sigh- you people. I like the story.. Very interesting. I agree, though, that the bats AND the moon are not needed. One or the other would've been better.. I also like how you made everything match. I like it.
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- [`Jellybean`] - 12/11/2008
- cool story, not explaining that he changed her makes it more interesting. *i saw an earlier comment* whats the red moon?
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- njrotc girl - 12/11/2008
- it looks like Bloody Mary! lol XP
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- Melancholy Love - 12/11/2008
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i tried to explain that he changed her but i ran out of room. half the story had to be deleated
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