- Title: First Prom
- Artist: Nasyl
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Description:
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It was a shame,
yes it was,
to a prom she had never been.
Years passed by and she would always dream,
what would have it been like if she had the chance.
Then this wonderful thing happened,
another chance presented itself.
She was to attend a beautiful prom,
where she would dance with a prince.
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This is what I'll be wearing to the Gaia Prom. The poem does reflect the truth. I nev - Date: 05/18/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- THE albino muskrat - 05/12/2008
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colors go together well, and I like the prom theme
a lot. - Report As Spam
- Nasyl - 05/12/2008
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californiaxrolls I completely understand. Yes I am
aware of the major flaws my entry has, but to be
honest my main motive for entering the arena was
not to win, but to share a story. I created this
look for the actual gaia prom. I looked nice so I
decided to enter it in the arena. I could have
changed a few things to make it "arena material,"
but that was not the reason for this look.
Thanks
for the advice, it does makes sense and I totally
agree with you.
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- californiaxrolls - 05/12/2008
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Sorry if I come off as harsh but I am merely
trying to help you improve on your
avatar.
You should have a more definite color
scheme. The gold in the avatar sticks out and
there should be either <i>more gold on the
avatar</i> or <i>change the gold colored jewelry
into a different color that you have
on.</i>
You should also stick with a more
original theme that makes your avatar stick out
and seem different and creative than other
avatars. If you - Report As Spam
- mackking - 05/12/2008
- kinda cool avatar wee!
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- alexenochs - 05/12/2008
- Omg so awesome ava biggrin
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- Truffle Pop - 05/12/2008
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- 404 Page Error - 05/12/2008
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Kinda boring, that idea is over-used, not very
original, but somewhat cute. - Report As Spam
