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- | Submitted on 11/26/2010 |
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- Title: Creature of the Shallows
- Artist: Social Bondage
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Description:
Yes yes. Greetings am say the creature...yes.
It am be the creature, yes, the creature of the shallows. It am so pleased to meet You it must rend Your body hollow!
It am breach Your torso, yes, with fingers sharp and fickle. It am drain Your vessels until left is but a trickle!
And you am join the bayou, yes, in which the creature wallows! Its depth accrue in tandem with the drowning in Your sorrows.
Hehehe...yes. - Date: 11/26/2010
- Tags: creature shallows
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Wintzi - 12/05/2010
- 5'd. Both the avatar and the poem are wonderful. <3
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- Social Bondage - 12/04/2010
- It was intentional. there is no reason to assume a swamp creature would speak English well.
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- Friend of Fungi - 12/04/2010
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I rather like this so I give you a 4/5 however you may want to proof read your poem, in the second sentence it says 'It am so pleased to meet you' should be 'I am so pleased to meet you' or perhaps "It is so please to meet you'
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- Magister Luna - 12/03/2010
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Poetry 5.
Avatar 5.
overall 5/5
Just amazing. - Report As Spam
- Ariel Yardena Davidson - 12/02/2010
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Mebu- kidding.
Good luck. - Report As Spam
- steelhinny - 12/02/2010
- Awesome!
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