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- | Submitted on 04/22/2012 |
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- Title: ZAS: Kimitra
- Artist: Kimiko Doll
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Description:
~Za Airashii Shoujo~
~The Adorable Girls~
The A is for adorable,
It’s what makes her so blushful,
Title is what makes her blissful,
The Adorable Girls are full of whirls,
They can curtsey and do twirls,
Cute, cute, as cute as they are,
Don’t let their prettiness pull you into their tar,
Behind the beauty, is no sweet cutie,
They’ll draw you in and steal your face,
If they deem you worth a chase,
They prey on beautiful maidens,
For they can become adorable vixens.
- Date: 04/22/2012
- Tags: zaairashiishoujo theadorablegirls kimitrascarletra
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Elluenda - 04/23/2012
- It is a bit unbalanced, both in shape and in color. It gets very dark at the top, and gets skinny and light at the bottom. It distracts the eye, and makes it feel... off. If the darker colors were more distributed, it would likely assuage this. I do, however, enjoy the fanned shapes, the colors used, and the upper half's distribution.
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- Simply Angle - 04/23/2012
- I love this, the colors you've gone with just blend. <3 5/5
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- Milmil as Mike - 04/23/2012
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I love the colors, but the shape of the dress is weird compared to the top. In this case, I imagine she'd be sitting prettier and most notably, but you would have to put some background or supplementary items that would help highlight the shapes of the dress and makeup, like petals or stage lights.
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