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  • Title: Captain Mismatch!
  • Artist: pxxl
  • Description: Long, Long ago, Gaians saw a odd pirate ship.
    It was painted in different colors, from the back, to the tip.

    The mast mast was striped, and the sails were green!
    This ship was truly odd, It was a sight that no one had seen!

    There on the deck, was the captain he looked rather strange. .
    He came with stories of his adventures, like the great octopus exchange.

    He soon had too leave, but his style was a nice catch.
    But who was this man? It was none other than, Captain Mismatch!
  • Date: 08/31/2008
  • Tags: captain mismatch
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • hvaosrdtreb - 09/01/2008
  • Your rhyming scheme is a bit off, but I'll give you a 4 because it's a rather interesting idea, and the poem shows you actually put some thought into it.
  • Duckburger - 09/01/2008
  • random items that work togeather - this is damn good! extremely impressive, and not a bad poem; the first five i've given so far
  • constelationsensation2 - 09/01/2008
  • I see what you're trying to do here. I love the poem. But i"m fonder of an avatar that does match, but this considering your choice and idea, you'll get a 5/5 from me.
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